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February 02, 2016

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    Xavier and Bob were best friends, they always hung out around the small lake they had in the middle of the park, or climb the trees surrounding it, and then one day they saw a Platypus on the edge of the small lake, and it looked like it’s tail was ripped a little bit.They didn’t think that a platypus could really get its tail ripped of all things, but when they thought they might be able to bring it into the vet so that they could help him they went over and Bob picked it up looking rather pleased with himself when he noticed a spur on one of its hind legs.

    “Xavier, did you know that these guys have a spur on the back of their hind legs?” Bob said in a little bit of wonder, and then Xavier remembered learning in science class about the spur on the back of a platypus, it emitted excruciating pain if you were stung, even though it is not lethal to humans it will hurt a lot if he was stung by it and if he knew Bob, which he did, he didn’t handle pain as well as most people.

    “Bob put it down it might sting you!” Xavier screamed while running over there. It took just a moment for Bob to drop it as fast as he could once he processed the message, but that’s all the platypus needed, and when he did drop, while it while fell down it used it’s ripped tail to change the direction of its body and got him with the spur. Xavier just got over to his friend before falling into the small lake, when he grabbed hold of one of his arms he felt a prick on the bottom of his leg, and then a pain he couldn’t of imagined, but then he couldn’t, but he also didn’t know where he was. All he did know however was that Bob was safe right beside him, but for some reason still screaming.

    He looked around, he had never even dreamed of a place like this.

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Annabellsmokeyrun23@gmail.comNANA

Feb 08, 2016

It was full of candy drops brownies he did not no what to say at all he frightened !😨 so he walk through the candy cane forest through the swirly world gum drops and then bob all the sudden showed up but in a puddle of chocolate. Bob said "just sllirp the chocolate then you will be able to get out😀
Jaynajjjandl@paulbunyan.net

Feb 08, 2016

But before I could drink some I looked at me and then Bob we were the size of ants,then a giant hand grabbed Bob and me and put us in his pocket.It was a furry hand like a platypus hand...
Mckenziekewe004@icloud.com

Feb 09, 2016

It all seemed different. We were tiny and the platypus was huge. And the platypus must be wearing pants because... we were in some sort of dark place but you could see out of the top. Then , the fun candy canes and gumdrops seemed to be getting darker.The candy caned were sharper than a blade. The gumdrops weren't bright neon colors. They were black. It was getting scarier and even darker when something loud was coming towards us.....
Isaac

Feb 09, 2016

We could hear big gigantic foot steps.I looked for Bob in the dark but I could not find him.I could feel the pain In my leg and I almost fell over because It hurt so bad.All of a sudden I fell asleep and was dreaming of getting out of the dark area and seeing my mom and dad standing there and waving to me and yelling watch out behind me.And when I turned around I saw a big...
RiLee Torgeson

Feb 22, 2016

Octopus pulled it self out of the ocean and wrestle the platypus well Bob and Xavier found a way out. Then found giant robots...
Dana

Feb 23, 2016

The GIANT ROBOTS WERE HUGE!!!!!! They were to big for us to out run them. We got tired, the robots swooped us up on his hand and threw us on a gumdrop.. Bob were are you? '' I 'am right here'' replyed Bob.. weren't we just here? I asked. No this place is colorful! Why do I see green tunnels? Bob I think we are in a different land.. It's all cartoonish! I said astonished! then all of a sudden I see a mushroom from Super Mario Brothers!
Ananbellsmokeyrun23@gmail.comNANA

Feb 26, 2016

"Bob don't look into Mario eyes he will turn you into a big fat MUSHROOM!!!" exclaimed Xavior. But Mario said" no way hosay" But Xavior was right, so you know what he dose stares right into his eyes! But Bob did not turn into a mushroom he went into a very deep slumber were all he could see was his dirty sock hamper and cows dying just by smelling them! All the sudden the hamper slapped him across the face over and over and over, but bob was not going to sit there like a dead mouse he fought back he made the dirty laundery hamper smell is arm pits and any thing else that made him smell like a dead cow. All the sudden he woke up and zombies aproched the woods and Xavior was saying "Come on Bob do you want to be eaten alive!?". Mario Is saying "Super Mario Brother Wii" And all the sudden Lady GaGa was singing poker face. All of the famous pop star singeres arived and sang the wieredst song the a Barbie said...